So, I inked my Hellboy pencils. I think this came out pretty well. I am a fan of a LOT of what I have going on here. I really like the monster emerging from the darkness of the cabinet. I like the panel where Liz is lighting that monster on fire and Hellboy is reaching for the syrup. I LOVE the last panel. I think the overall set up of the first three panels works well, too.
If I would change one thing, I would close the top panel and open the last one. The change of envrionment from one room to the next in the last panel needs to show itself visually as a different space. I think it's semi-succesful with the cleanliness of the room compared to the kitchen. Had I opened and made that panel bleed then closed the top panel. The first environment would be closed panels and the new one would be a large open panel. I think that would have worked better, thoughts?
I agree with your comment on opening the last panel and closing the top. But don't sweat it! I didn't really have trouble understanding that the panel changed from kitchen to some kind of dining room. Really awesome inks as well!
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